the
always
movement
exploding from the dancers bodies.
Twirling,
twisting,
tip toeing
tap,
tap,
tap.
Leaping,
skipping,
moving all around.
Pointed toes,
bent legs, straight legs,
pirouettes.
Jumping up and
going into a
spiral, swirly,
koru.
By Room 16
good poem.
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Caitlin
I think that is a very good poem.
ReplyDeleteIt was very fun writing it
Without a dout, that poem is great! I can't think of a single thing I would change.
ReplyDeleteBy Finn
the poem was great!
ReplyDeletebut we think the going should be moving.
we love the tap, tap, tap.
isla and coco
we loved the poem becauses it sounded ausome!
ReplyDeletegeorgia and phoebe
we like the tap tap tap because it sounds like onomatopaeia.
ReplyDeletewe think the poem was thumbs up.
richie & adam
I think we should definitely change the going into moving or twisting, but apart from that its a fantastic poem
ReplyDeleteEloise
I like the piture because the picture has some one in mid air.
ReplyDeleteJohnson
we think the poem is great especially the twirling twisting tiptoeing tap tap tap which is alliteration by Abbey and Serena
ReplyDeletewe like the exploding part because it gets a picture in our heads. We think we should work a little bit more on the going and and part, but it is mostly good.
ReplyDeleteBy Madison and Michelle
the going into a koru should be spining into a koru because it sounds better and its also a nother move by JCB and DOMINICV
ReplyDeleteWe think that going into a koru should be transforming into a koru because transforming means turning into something, and it is just a beter word. Finn and Timmy
ReplyDeletewe think we shold not change anything but we shold
ReplyDeletetake out the green bits because it makes more sents.By letiara and aurora
Cool poem
ReplyDeletei love to dance
ReplyDeletefrom rosie
that was alfull!
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